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    I had been shot by a cupid's arrow
    I had felt the high of the cupid's drug
    I had held hands among the trees
    rising high to accept the graces
    of the angels who stood mystified
    of the concept of love.
    The music had sang our praises
    & never before had
    country, jazz, hip hop, r&b
    techno, rock-n-roll, & punk
    never had sounded so
    welcoming to our hearts.
    I've flown to the moon
    for a bit of a lunar dance
    & the girls in their dresses
    beautiful dresses twirl
    so majestically & I
    thought them to be queens.
    I had listened to their words,
    both welcomed & unwelcomed,
    & collected their tears &
    put them in the boxes of time.
    I had stood on love poems I used to write
    & proclaimed, "CONSIDER THE MOUNTAINS MOVED!"
    I've laid down to sleep,
    perchance to dream,
    of the faces then & now.
    I had suffer the fates of time -
    the silent goodbye & the pushing away.
    The pull, she pulls & pulls,
    then push & pull then the big shove
    & her mouth was silent falling into the boxes of time.
    I've listened to the silence as
    I read words of promises & hopes.
    I had let so many oppurtunities
    to get to know new people
    walk into the seconds of time.
    I was the rider of the waves
    that crashed violently into
    these many unforgiving rocks
    and I believed that I don't care anymore.
    I had stood in the downpour
    of the wholesome misery rain
    & never got the feeling
    of being renewed.
    I had listened to the sorrow
    of the woman hardened by life &
    the cupid's arrow piercing poison.
    I had seen a young lady
    hiding in fear of the male embrace.
    I had heard a man say
    that women can never be trusted.
    I had heard a woman say
    that man can never be trusted.
    The sunrise is the lonely hour
    after a hard day night.
    I had listened sadly to
    a sad refrain of the piano,
    the melody bearing a weight
    onto this weary heart.
    I've placed my behind the door
    tears into the boxes of time.
    I had fallen off the highs &
    hit the low of a cupid's arrow.
    My hopes & dreams had fallen
    prey to the cupid's poison.

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    I like the pendulum of your phrasing.

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